Speaking of food, bring back regular Will Gordon (or find a semi-literate substitute). Fast food, beer, liquor, that’s a key thing for us readers, and he had decent not full of himself takes on things.

Speaking as a dad, the problem with movies and TV is they’re all about the delivery and that’s only a relatively brief (though intense) part of the story. Most likely it’s going to be a lot of waiting around with a long gradually growing period of discomfort for her before the more serious part starts. And then after…