It doesn’t have to be persuasive, but presumably she’s writing this to make a case for Feminism so perhaps it might be a good idea to be persuasive just a little bit?

I could have a written a better bullshit piece of fabrication for Feminism. I don’t have to subscribe to your dogmatic ideology to believe in equality. I’m not a Feminist and I’m not a sexist. If you don’t like that, go cry in your safe space for all I care. This is snake oil salesmanship at its worst.