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I don’t have to worry about being castrated when I’m walking home from 7-11 at night

Mellow out, Will

She did “My Neck, My Back”, which should have put an end to the whole genre

bring back Charlie Cox’s Daredevil into the fold —> bring Charlie Cox’s Daredevil back into the fold

You never see Khia getting involved in this type of petty drama

I listened to his Joe Rogan appearance out of morbid curiosity. He had the opportunity to talk for four hours to an audience of millions and the whole thing is utterly incoherent. I mean there’s literally nothing there.

Quit stealing my moves

It’s a big pile of meh

I think it means kids who never haven’t had phones

Well the article uses “U.S. Government” and “U.S. government” interchangeably, so one of them has to be wrong, eh?

This ... is not how ellipses work

a lot time shifts —> a lot of time shifts

Bill Clinton, George W. Bush, and Donald Trump were all born in the summer of 1946

Please decide if you’re going to capitalize Every Single Word Of Titles or not. Just choose to do one or the other

Tyler was arrested and booking —> Tyler was arrested and booked

Couldn’t they just replace a couple of them at a time with doppelgängers? Actually aren’t they already doing that?

Looks like Eminem at the Super Bowl

No notes! This read like an actual movie review in a real publication

And she clearly proofreads!

Didn’t this guy turn out to be a serial ass-grabber?