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That one stuck out to me as well. The man hadn’t even been mentioned yet, either, as they said “a man”.

Shame on the daily beast for this one:

“...after he punched a man’s girlfriend...”

He punched a woman. If her boyfriend is relevant to the tale, perhaps introduce him later.