Wait, wait, wait......So your retarded enough to claim that someone who lives in South Korea should learn English....He should fucking learn the language of a country where he doesn’t live...Are you retarded? Did you used to eat the paint chips that fell off the wall when you were a kid?

No commas, as few adjectives as possible, using the simplest vocabulary possible.

“Bill Gates wrote BASIC before his team wrote Windows...”

This. A lot of that migration was life-or-death necessity, not “loving it,” and that argument just irritated the hell out of me.

If you can’t start with “love” then everyone who does love will beat everyone who “likes” or “hates”. This is a rule of the universe. The first humans who crossed the arctic tundra from Siberia to Alaska in -60 degree temperatures had to love it. The rest stayed in the East Africa Savannah.

Man, this is exactly what I came down to the comments to write. I felt like it should be a great article, but I couldn’t get past the writing at all. Just awful to read.

Every time you see an article about “how to write” on the internet, this is what they talk about: short, punchy sentences. No commas, as few adjectives as possible, using the simplest vocabulary possible. Since there is no variation, the entire thing feels clipped and staccato.

Yeah, the content and advice are solid, but I cannot get over that the tone of it that it sounds like it was written by a pretentious gasbag.

This is actually a great article, full of actionable tips and clear reasoning, but the writing style sounds like a children’s book writer. Not a bad thing, but a bit jarring.

Seriously, this isn't even remotely bad. Lots of items on the list, but I'd rather someone give me a list with 20 things where I can pick something than 2 things that are unaffordable or unavailable. I read the list, and didn't want to punch anything. I even salute her good taste for realizing that North Face is…

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