Better?

Hello.
My name is Manufacture Ireland,i saw your profile
today and became interested in
you,i will also like to know you more,
and i want you to send an email to my
email address(bullshitemailaddress@yahoo.com)
so i can give you my picture for you

Crap, you're right. Hang on.

It's terribly nice. Kudos, very well done.