Your first paragraph completely and utterly misses the point.
Because she walked alone she should expect to get raped? What point are you even trying to make here?
Your first paragraph completely and utterly misses the point.
Because she walked alone she should expect to get raped? What point are you even trying to make here?
What I can't understand is why such a big deal was made about the Mars gift! I thought it was really sweet and endearing. Why did all the characters react in a way that made you think he had given her something absolutely horrendous? It seemed a bit of an overreaction to me…