Yes. Or, look at other authors- specifically @mylesmcnutt who manages to get his Game of Thrones expert AV Club article out in the same amount of time.

So many of your stray observations are STILL just quotes from the show…that presumably everyone watched. Try harder.

Why do your stray observations read like a novelization of the episode (in the worst way)

New drinking game, every time Zach Handlen says a show doesn't "get bogged down in the details"