Her voice isn’t raspy enough.

Right on... keep me coming. The criticism will make the feature film better.

Ye-.

I was still mad about Hobbes. He was my wingman of choice all through Wing Commander 2

That’s what I’m going for

Thanks.

Not your cup of tea I suppose.

Made Troi wear a regulation uniform finally.

Wanted to make it easy for the Porn version. 😂.. any suggestions to improve? Flightseat? Pilot Cabin? The original title was Fragment (from the mind fragments the aliens leave).

Working on improving physics for the feature. It becomes a time thing. Aerodynamic physics is just easie and faster to animate. But I’m working with some zero g plug in that may help.

... hence the “Memento” mix. You get it. I think you’ll like the feature.

Thanks man. You’re my audience.

My last writing job... and it was awesome working with those actors. I’m thinking we don’t have the same tastes in movies & tv.

I’d write a role for Mark Hammill in a second. And Tom Bernard. See above comment for opinions on Wing Commander.

Guilty. If anything, I think those Wing Commander stories were a major inspiration. I was working as a software salesman when those came out. I’m talking WC2-3. I was hanging out at Egghead Software when Wc1 first came out. I played those games through all hours of the night...

Wonderful voice! She’s in Dragon Age as well.

Thanks. Meyers have gotten supremely better since I made this. I forgot to mention in the article that the short was made on a laptop. The feature will be 4K, (made on a desktop)

Interesting and valid comment. nowadays I’d use the one that videocopilot.net provide. But those weren’t around then.

I’ll respond 1 at a time... not throwing catch phrases, writing what I enjoy. 2, Not ww2, but f-14's. Top Gun, reliance on missiles over tracers. 3 you should do it, not think it. 4. Did my best on the effects. Did them myself. Technology has improved since I made the short, so hopefully the feature will look…

Think about where we were 87 years ago. No hd televisions in our hands, no self driving cars. I think 80 years is about right.