sorry, i don't quite understand. yes that she does good voice work or yes that you agree with my sense that it's a weak spot

do people really think aisha tyler does good voice work on Archer? i find i almost never laugh; it is as if her only intonation is shaming disbelief 'archer, i can't believe you did *that*' over and over again. maybe that is the script/character she got rather than the voicework? or maybe people like her jokes more…

"Ugh, Chuck mansplaining to Rebecca about Carol Burnett’s tug on the ear."

"His new track “Flatline” not only zings Tyson, it … urges people to read the work of a known Holocaust denier."

Well the reasons I read it as ever after are the reasons I pointed to in my first post: the telescope present she loves (she doesn't need a telescope if she intends in any capacity to be a space princess, so her reaction here to some degree proves her intentions) and the sequence which shows her better at all…

Yeah, I think you are right; that is a better description of the central conflict. I suppose then my criticism shifts to: the happily-ever-after ending where her old life is fun now and she parties with Caine style boots is not *earned* or at least takes on a very sinister tone, given what we've just witnessed is a…

I'm sure they could think of something. The point is that Jupiter Ascending acts like its central conflict is resolved when according to its own letter it is not.

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Comma at the end of a sentence/paragraph: "and face Mike again,"; Try to tidy up in the future, as soon I'll be too busy with promotion for FH to help any further.

It wasn't even to teach him! Chuck's position is that "people don't change." For Chuck, Jimmy is condemned forever i.e. "you'll always be slippin' Jimmy." I don't want to imagine the sort of legal system that would follow from the idea that people don't change… Does someone with their copy of Discipline & Punish handy…

Weird that the editor missed this hanging sentence: "So the first half usually lags, which is what’s happening here. South Park has pulled off successful"

This one time Saget and I were down in Mexico doing some promotion for Full H and Saget decides he wants to learn to parasail.