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(And that's the last thing he wrote. I hoped to get him to read every single thing I wrote and edit away, but ended up losing him there. Overall, it's fair to say it was a pretty nice catch, and a decent payback for his inability to say "sorry about that". I have to say I was satisfied with my catch, and made this

(Okay, we've got him. Let's try to get him to spend a ridiculous amount of time editing our writing.)

(Woah baby! We caught a whopper! He can't help himself at this point. Let's keep him going with this grammar thing. We will make an error in our own grammar to try and get him to bite again. I suggest using "sense" instead of "since"…)

(Keep going with grammar. Let's get this fish on the boat.)

(Uh oh, we may be losing him. Make fun of his grammar again.)

(Nice. He's defending himself. Time to go after his ego.)

(Oh boy! Capital letters! He's hooked.)

(Uh oh, he's getting away! Desperate measures time. Try to get him back with pointing out something that he already conceded was a mistake.)

(We've got a bite! Let's hope it's a big one! Now that he's on the line, let's not lose him. We want to reel him in and get him to write even more. Point out something else, like poor grammar. His ego should have trouble with that.)

(Okay, a ridiculous response. He's nibbling. Time to troll. Now, we don't want to scare him away. In order to get him on the line, we bait the hook again by making fun of something he writes to another commenter, saying his spoiler was a "quasi-spoiler")

(Hey commenters, it's time for everyone's favorite fun game…fishing for Mike D'Angelo! I decided to do it when he gave away the ending of a movie in one of his reviews and simply couldn't say "sorry about that". I have edited my posts to show you the formula - everything in parenthesis is what I'm writing now, but