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brad french
avclub-a951b47eab43fcf3f8aae82b0a4e2f63--disqus

I'm new here, so have a little patience please.
Commenting on the review:
1) It is distressing that you are reviewing a story with almost no consideration of
the characters, their personalities. It seems to me that you are merely moving
chess pieces upon a board.
2) The motivation for the characters is not just