I teach writing. Where's the damn thesis? You NEVER take that long "establishing a thesis," especially in an essay that's this short. I don't need a recap; but some analysis of the subject matter would be nice. Your condescension is cute, but unnecessary.

I teach writing. Where's the damn thesis? You NEVER take that long "establishing a thesis," especially in an essay that's this short. I don't need a recap; but some analysis of the subject matter would be nice. Your condescension is cute, but unnecessary.

Why are these reviews getting worse and worse? First two paragraphs about monkeys? How about writing about the episode?

Why are these reviews getting worse and worse? First two paragraphs about monkeys? How about writing about the episode?