"The hosts are able [to] speak to the issue from both a publishing and a writing point of view, which is enlightening."

Your writing is good. A+.

" (Three of i[t]s members, including Halstead, would go on to form the more country-influenced Mojave 3.)"

"It’s a big hit [both] for Cartoon Network and in its time slot with males under 35, with the most recent episode outdrawing Archer in the same demo…"

"the song that nobody had ever heard from the movie that nobody had ever heard [of] before the nominations were announced."

"Robert Evans doesn’t wanna be nobody’s superhero."

" A friend of [mine] once brought 'Bad Drawing Of A Cow’s Butt Man' to life on the page."

"In an essay at the end of the book, Remender writes that this title is a magnification of what he experience[d] as a teen…"