I just watched the end and I liked it. And… Clary could have had a bit more of a journey before and during her encounter with the "brothers". I'm assuming you are only targeting people with a very short attention span or capacity for details since we could have enjoyed her angst as she approached the first knowledge…

I just watched the first and am part of the way through the second episode. I really think that the story idea and cinematic quality is excellent. I would just say that it is unfortunate that you didn't give Clary a bit more lead up to her line " I always thought something was missing" or whatever. One small scene…