Try making graphs or dealing with references.

There's nothing wrong with the grammar, it's just a strange paragraph since you get this weird deja vu towards the end. It made me stop reading the article to find out why it was strange, so it's kind of useful for the writers to know these things.

Do you not think his vast success means that he should be dealt with now? Especially when there is such a short time remaining until the case is effectively closed?

Sorry, by 'you', I meant the Gizmodo commenting community. Then again, that's like talking to a lifeless corpse, so perhaps I shouldn't bother.

'So Soverain sued Newegg and won in 2010. Soverain also won a lot. It took $40 million off of Amazon in 2005, a combined $17.9 million off of Victoria's Secret and Avon and a 1 percent tax on all sales, and an undisclosed amount from The Gap, to name a few. Then, in 2010, it won $2.5 million off of Newegg. But Newegg…

Sure thing, buddy.

Still the best ultrabook available, all things considered. Especially with Apple's nice student discount!

Really?

You forget how much extra screen space just one extra inch provides you with - it's a significant boost along both axes.

Actually, by using apostrophes it implies it is talking about the present tense, which Kyle is explicitly trying to change with his comment.

Why did you decide against building your own? You get better components, for less money, and it's really fun!

'There's no better way to insult Best Buy than to use its extremely lenient $50 coupon to buy up as many $100 Amazon gift cards as you can.'

Oh no... the release date for the 620 is the 28th in the UK. Might be a tight one...

Did you read the last word of the title of this piece?

That little known part of the EM spectrum...

Look at the specs though! They surely couldn't match prices even if they wanted to.

But the bias I'm talking about comes from the way insurance-run healthcare systems work.

Socialising medicine is surely the first step to removing these biases from a doctor's judgement.