Yes, I believe the author of the article is confused about what happens in the book.

I haven’t read the book, but I did notice that the article says both premenstrual and a girl on her period, which is not the same thing. You’re either premenstrual or you’re menstruating. Not both. So with the addition of prepubescent, I’m really confused.

I’m confused. Isn’t Takeshi a Japanese dude? At least in his stack? He just wakes up in a white dude’s body? Why would Kinnaman be in the torture scene, if he’s Japanese in his stack?

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Am I the only one who doesn't give a single flying fuck about how game designers and artists choose to display their female characters?

Games are art — You don't see an art critic getting upset when an artist chooses to display some "unrealistic" choices... Okay, yes you do... So…