It uses second-person singular instead of third-person/passive.

I knew it was fake the moment they said “gist”.

The writing in this thing is amateur grade. “the gist of the check is valid to us.” What? I’ve told interns to rewrite communication for stuff more coherent than that.

This was either faked by some kid fresh out of college that thinks they know what the business world is like from the movies and old professors…

Any VPs are too many.

IMO.